Just Bliss

My dear friends,

I write what ever hits and touches my heart, poetry, prose,  personal experience, incident or event

I also translate poetry of famous poets of Urdu language into English to let the world know about our poetry .

But  I feel that I need to be checked guided and advised sincerely. Is my poetry translation okay? or where do I need to improve? the format, rhyming. meter, anything anything. Just feel free to please go through any of my poetry and advise me please

Thank you

warm regards and love

tanveer