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I need your help please

Posted on: December 15, 2014


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My dear friends,

I write what ever hits and touches my heart, poetry, prose,  personal experience, incident or event

I also translate poetry of famous poets of Urdu language into English to let the world know about our poetry .

But  I feel that I need to be checked guided and advised sincerely. Is my poetry translation okay? or where do I need to improve? the format, rhyming. meter, anything anything. Just feel free to please go through any of my poetry and advise me please

Thank you

warm regards and love

tanveer

35 Responses to "I need your help please"

I can’t help too much with translation, but I’m enjoying your writings so far.

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Ur translations r too good MashAllah. Keep writing n mesmerizing readers like us ☺

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thank you Nadia for your love

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Always good. Nothing to worry about at all.

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thank you for consoling me🙂

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Always very good!

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very generous of you🙂 thank you

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Sorry but I haven’t this capacity🙂

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that’s like a great and humble man:) stay blessed

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Tanveer, this is a very sensitive and humble request. I have never seen anyone do this before. Once in a while there is a mispelled word or thought that I’m not sure about, but I know translating from one language to another does not always go word for word. For instance the same word can have different meanings, depending on place and culture. If you have English speaking friends they could review the work and help you. If you want to, feel free to email me. The address is listed in my profile. I am no expert though.
I so appreciate your blog and the poetry is wonderful, the articles are great! I look forward to more!

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im so very grateful to you dear one. i will send you some of my poetry translations. i have translated and tried to keep the gist and spirit as it is in original language cause Urdu is my mother tongue, what i need is to my work to be checked if its sound good and makes sense. you are right words have different aspects meaning etc. i’m humbly very grateful to you for understanding me and extending your hand to help me out. thank you once again. my email id is tanveer808@yahoo.com

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i’m sorry couldn’t find your email id. can you please write it here or select any poetry from my blogs and get it/them checked and oblige please

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I enjoy your writings just the way they are…

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so kind of honestly:) loads oflove

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ah dear… I can translate in my mother tongue… but poetry is something so special, absolutly magic, it sound perfect only in the original language 🙂 but for the hearth there is only one: Love.
Wish you a great day (tomorrow) Claudine

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Thanks a million for your greatness. God bless you amen

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I enjoy the poems. Their inspiring.

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i’m humbled. thank you

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As a whole your translated work speaks volumes for your creative skills, maturity and perception on Urdu poetry..Wish you all the best..

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Thank you so very much Zaib ji for you broad mindedness wisdom and kindness for encouraging. thanks again

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Very good I have no words to express remarkablework you are doing.love u dear.

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i’m humbled, thank you

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I think your translations are so great for English not being your first tongue. I know I could never do even half as well from English to Urdu. You’re blogs are always nice, I just don’t always get by to read because I’m so busy.

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Thank you, your words work magic:) thanks again for encouraging me. God bless you

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I love your poems, keep it up!.
Aquileana😛

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thank you dear. your words give me strength. God bless you

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thank you sir, i’m honored and will enjoy seeing your pictures:). God gives pleasure to our eyes to our heart and bless us every moment. Its not Him whose doing all that unkind deeds anywhere in the world. He’s waiting every moment to see if His Creation, the humans being will ever become humane! He pacifies our pain in the pictures of the colorful sky you captured and shared. this is least we can do to bring peace to anyone who sees it:) may we be blessed and follow the right path amen

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I am new to your blog. My husband does translations on occasion for me from English to Spanish and he says with some words or phrases, there is no translation so he wings it the best he can. Translating is hard… thank you for caring.❤

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thank you for dropping by and care. please do visit again and honor me with your kind words. thank you

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