The air was dull———
Posted on: November 10, 2015
- In: Poetry
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The air was dull; with ambiance I didn’t share
Wind was dusty; with ambiance I didn’t share
Expected rainfall too willingly to pour down
Thus waited all life but didn’t bother to share
Hundreds of dreams were in eyes of alluring glory
Felt cool gentle wind on the way, but didn’t share
They kept beautifying only the outside setting
The calamity that troubled home was not shared
The tragic instant passed as if without Almighty
Tolerated gloom but didn’t share with Almighty
In nights I shared what not with thou O’ moon
During the day I didn’t unveil anything O’ moon
14 Responses to "The air was dull———"
November 11, 2015 at 5:11 AM
Too good , awesome brilliant
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November 11, 2015 at 8:33 AM
im humbled, thank you so much, peace and blessings to you 🙂
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November 11, 2015 at 10:16 AM
The moon and mysterious words create a different kind of mood, Tanveer. Nicely written.
blessings for all
Just Bliss 
November 10, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Great writing. I loved this post. Alluring image helped set the mood.
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November 11, 2015 at 8:34 AM
your kind encouraging comments increase my passion, thank you dear, stay blessed
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November 11, 2015 at 5:20 PM
Your welcome. May you and your always be blessed.
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November 12, 2015 at 11:33 AM
wish you more peace, love and wisodm
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November 12, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Thank you. Same to you and yours.
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November 13, 2015 at 8:11 AM
amen
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