Floating clouds join the fluttering veil
Posted on: October 21, 2016
- In: Poetry
- 23 Comments
Wrapped in fresh fragrance of dreams
Engulfed in lovely shades of emotions
Absorbed in new hopes new passion
It’s captivating alluring inspiring gale
Blissful weather allures calm mild gale
You aren’t here this time with me love
There’s no life no joy without you love
Life is static weary and weird my love
Life is a vast forest to be lost my love
Got no letter no message from you
Haven’t seen you, I endure the grief
My eyes long to see you to get relief
I’m hurt and upset like a caged bird
Floating clouds join the fluttering veil
Blissful weather allures calm mild gale
شاعر: رئیس فروغ
انگریزی ترجمہ:تنویر روؤف صاحبہ
گلوکارہ: مہناز
موسیقی: نیاز احمد(اغلباً)
پیش کش : شعیب منصور (اغلباً)
(شاید جناب تاجدار عادل موسیقی اور پیش کش کے بارے میں
زیادہ درست جانتے ہوں، تو میری مدد فرمائیں)
موسم تو کرے پاگل ساتھی
چاہت کے نئے رنگوں میں رچی
ارمانوں کی
امیدوں کی
کلیاں ہیں بہت کومل ساتھی
موسم تو کرے پاگل ساتھی
چمکے نہ کوئی وعدے کی کرن
انجانا بھی
ان دیکھا بھی
جیون ہے بڑا جنگل ساتھی
آنکھوں نے تجھے دیکھا جو نہیں
دُکھ سہتی ہوں
چُپ رہتی ہوں
پنچھی کی طرح گھائل ساتھی
موسم تو کرے پاگل ساتھی
23 Responses to "Floating clouds join the fluttering veil"
October 22, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Amy dear for informing. kindly send the link of George so i go there. my best prayers are for him and his family
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October 23, 2016 at 5:38 PM
I’ve been offline and just now saw this comment. See the link I just sent you. (((HUGS))) ❤
October 24, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Thanks a lot dear one for guiding me to get to George’s site. I wrote my feelings there. thank you again. one more favor i ask you for please. when friends like my blog, how can i reply to them
October 24, 2016 at 9:43 PM
I’m not understanding. What do you mean when friends like your blog? Do you mean in your posts? I would love to help. Could you explain a little bit more? ❤
October 24, 2016 at 11:10 PM
well, yeah i want to ask you that when my post is liked by many bloggers then how should i thank them? do i have to open every one’s page and write there?
October 24, 2016 at 11:23 PM
The easiest way is to use the WP app for your cellphone. Download that. Open it. There you will see pictures on the top bar that designate your site, the reader, comments. Hit the one for comments. There is one for likes too. Hit one of your likers and a list should show of other likers. If there are more then 10 I think go to the bottom and there you will see. See all. Hit that and the when list of your likers will show. Easy to get to all blogs that way. WP does not make it easy. Hope this helps. Feel free to ask for more help if you need it.
October 24, 2016 at 11:39 PM
you are so kind and sweet AmyRose dear. But I dont have smart phone so have no such options. Is it possible all this in desk top?
October 24, 2016 at 11:46 PM
Yes. Do you see the bell object at the top of your home page? If you click on that it will open up for you to see a list of your comments and likers. There is another way that I do but I don’t remember how to download it anymore. It is the WordPress notifications found at WordPress.com. Do you have this?
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October 31, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Thank you so much Amy dear for guiding me. i want one more favor from you please. you know i translate Urdu poetry into Englsih. now I’m compiling my book of poetry translation. So i want to know if my work is worth to be compiled? i want your opinion and comments please . If im asking you too much you are free to refuse 🙂 my blessings to you
October 31, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Tanveer, what does your Heart tell you? Do you have this inner urge to do this book? Are you on fire about it? If so then do it. Don’t heed what others think. Have confidence in yourself to do what your Heart tells you to do. (((HUGS))) ❤
November 3, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Amy dear i wrote before also that i need favor from you. You know i translate Urdu classic and Sufi poetry into English. I’m compiling it into book form. so please if you find any error, mistake blunder in it do let me know. and i would love to put your comments in my book only if you allow 🙂
November 4, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Yet I don’t know Urdu so I wouldn’t know if you are translating correctly. I really don’t understand how I could give my honest opinion. Much love to you, Tanveer. ❤
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November 8, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Amy dear i’m waiting for your comment on my poetry translation please
October 27, 2016 at 9:31 PM
I reply to comments that’s easy. but all those who just like it post then i dont know how to say thank you to them
October 29, 2016 at 12:44 PM
👌A good title for a beautiful poem. 👍Tanveer!
Shiva
blessings for all
Just Bliss 
October 22, 2016 at 12:12 AM
Tanveer, please go to George’s site for update on his condition. Bless you. He and family need prayer.
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October 23, 2016 at 1:09 PM
im waiting AmyRose for George’s site link
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October 23, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Sorry, Tanveer. I thought you knew how to get there. This is the link https://georgeforfun.wordpress.com/2016/10/21/update-on-george-10212016/
❤ ❤ ❤
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