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It’s good they died!

Posted on: January 12, 2015


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It’s good, they died—–
If they lived, what would they see?
—burning hunger?
—rising poverty?
—homicide everywhere?
–putrefying dead bodies?
dignity and pride being disgraced?
It’s good they died!
If, lived, what would they see?
Immoral and callous conduct
helplessness and despair
inhumanity, hurting humanity
corruption and agitating?
Blessed, not seeing, this
It’s good, they died
If, lived, what would they see?
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13 Responses to "It’s good they died!"

Such powerful words, and so important to share! Thank you Tanveer.

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Thank you, i’m humbled and obliged🙂

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Poignant Tanveer, but controversial also…

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Perhaps adding this I would like this poem better:

(Something Tells me) It’s good they died!

I’m not a published author nor anyone important, but the poem would appeal more to me this way. You can erase this message if you think it’s wrong. Just adding the “(Something tells me)”, takes away a bit of the roughness(?)

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thank you for your interest and care. i translated it. its not composed by me. but your idea is appreciated. thank you

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🙂 I would love to know

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Oh, I see what it is. I’m glad you understood though, thanks.

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I know, I don’t mean to imply I know more, and as I said I am no one to correct. But for me, this is how I perceived the poem: (Erase it if you don’t agree)

(Something Tells Me) It may have been good that they died

It may have been good, that they died—–
If they would have lived, what would they have seen?
—burning hunger?
—rising poverty?
—homicide everywhere?
–putrefying dead bodies?
dignity and pride being disgraced?
It may have been good that they died!
If, having lived, what would they have seen?
Immoral and callous conduct
helplessness and despair
inhumanity, hurting humanity
corruption and agitating?
Blessed, not seeing, this
It may have been good, they died
If, having lived, what would they have seen?

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beautiful🙂 I like it this way more better. thank you. I will need your advice and suggestions future too. thanks again

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Thanks, I’m so glad you understood, and I knew what he/she meant. Thank you for understanding.

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I don’t know Tanveer, maybe I did wrong in changing the verbs, the one who wrote it might not like this…

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A well wisher can never be wrong, i value it very much🙂

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