I need your help please
Posted on: December 15, 2014
- In: Poetry
- 35 Comments
My dear friends,
I write what ever hits and touches my heart, poetry, prose, personal experience, incident or event
I also translate poetry of famous poets of Urdu language into English to let the world know about our poetry .
But I feel that I need to be checked guided and advised sincerely. Is my poetry translation okay? or where do I need to improve? the format, rhyming. meter, anything anything. Just feel free to please go through any of my poetry and advise me please
Thank you
warm regards and love
tanveer
35 Responses to "I need your help please"
December 15, 2014 at 12:44 PM
Ur translations r too good MashAllah. Keep writing n mesmerizing readers like us ☺
December 15, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Always good. Nothing to worry about at all.
December 15, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Sorry but I haven’t this capacity 🙂
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December 16, 2014 at 2:22 PM
that’s like a great and humble man:) stay blessed
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December 15, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Tanveer, this is a very sensitive and humble request. I have never seen anyone do this before. Once in a while there is a mispelled word or thought that I’m not sure about, but I know translating from one language to another does not always go word for word. For instance the same word can have different meanings, depending on place and culture. If you have English speaking friends they could review the work and help you. If you want to, feel free to email me. The address is listed in my profile. I am no expert though.
I so appreciate your blog and the poetry is wonderful, the articles are great! I look forward to more!
December 16, 2014 at 2:27 PM
im so very grateful to you dear one. i will send you some of my poetry translations. i have translated and tried to keep the gist and spirit as it is in original language cause Urdu is my mother tongue, what i need is to my work to be checked if its sound good and makes sense. you are right words have different aspects meaning etc. i’m humbly very grateful to you for understanding me and extending your hand to help me out. thank you once again. my email id is tanveer808@yahoo.com
December 16, 2014 at 3:01 PM
i’m sorry couldn’t find your email id. can you please write it here or select any poetry from my blogs and get it/them checked and oblige please
December 16, 2014 at 6:11 PM
I’m at nicodemasplusthree@gmail.com. I will do whatever I can!
December 16, 2014 at 1:29 AM
ah dear… I can translate in my mother tongue… but poetry is something so special, absolutly magic, it sound perfect only in the original language 🙂 but for the hearth there is only one: Love.
Wish you a great day (tomorrow) Claudine
December 16, 2014 at 4:59 AM
As a whole your translated work speaks volumes for your creative skills, maturity and perception on Urdu poetry..Wish you all the best..
December 16, 2014 at 2:18 PM
Thank you so very much Zaib ji for you broad mindedness wisdom and kindness for encouraging. thanks again
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December 16, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Very good I have no words to express remarkablework you are doing.love u dear.
December 19, 2014 at 3:12 AM
I think your translations are so great for English not being your first tongue. I know I could never do even half as well from English to Urdu. You’re blogs are always nice, I just don’t always get by to read because I’m so busy.
December 19, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Thank you, your words work magic:) thanks again for encouraging me. God bless you
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December 19, 2014 at 5:37 AM
I love your poems, keep it up!.
Aquileana 😛
December 19, 2014 at 10:12 AM
thank you dear. your words give me strength. God bless you
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December 24, 2014 at 10:10 AM
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January 7, 2015 at 9:40 PM
I am new to your blog. My husband does translations on occasion for me from English to Spanish and he says with some words or phrases, there is no translation so he wings it the best he can. Translating is hard… thank you for caring. ❤
January 7, 2015 at 10:48 PM
thank you for dropping by and care. please do visit again and honor me with your kind words. thank you
blessings for all
Just Bliss 
December 15, 2014 at 12:02 PM
I can’t help too much with translation, but I’m enjoying your writings so far.
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December 15, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, I/m hmbled
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