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My luggage!

Posted on: February 6, 2013


my luggage

My luggage is laid in empty room,

Secretly hidden are some wishes;

Relics of dreams lay safely there,

Some flowers hidden unwillingly;

 Spirit kept searching for a friend—!

My pride strolled hither and thither;

But, scent of my soil didn’t ascend!

My pride dishonored in alien’s land;

A lamp of hope, lighted in eerie

 Eyes, in murky, gloomy nights;

The body thawed like mud in water

Discoloring colors, in monsoon rain;

The door’s kept open for you——-

My luggage is laid in empty room!

Composed by Shaista Farrukh Mufti

Translated by, Tanveer Rauf

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14 Responses to "My luggage!"

A very touching translation of the fine poetry

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Dark secrets, dashed hopes – all stored in an “empty” room.

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Mrs Rauf this is a marvelous beyond my expectations !! i feel that u enter my heart and see all those hurt that has f been lying there hidden for so long , to be very honest i have given up any hope of healing , but when ever u do a translation of any of my work u give me a feeling that there is some one out there who knows my sufferings , how do u do it is a mystery ,

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Thank you Shaista beta. you know i translate when i feel it deep inside myself. I don’t translate everything you know it. Allah pak tumko sakoon de ameen

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Tanveerji please listen to this song its beautiful its divine
please listen to this song

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please listen to this

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“Some flowers hidden unwillingly”
“The body thawed like mud in water” — I am staggered by the beauty and depths in these two lines.

When words morph from the soul into ink, and from languages into meanings — the true essence of them are often lost. However, this is one poem I have come across by far that must have been translated with the same eloquence, as when it was birthed first on the writer’s soul.

Shaista Farrukh Mufti, Tanveer Rauf — such fine work, my fine ladies.
So glad to have found this gem!
Salaam

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both of us very greateful and wish you to read more of my work please. wish you all happiness and peace with regards:)

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To: https://tanveerrauf.wordpress.com/

It has come to my attention that you have made an unauthorized use of my copyrighted Work entitled “Lonely is the Night” in the publishing of http://www.darkdevil16.deviantart.com

I have reserved all rights in the Work, which was first published in October 15, 2011 on http://darkdevil16.deviantart.com/art/Lonely-is-the-Night-263611659, with copyright registered to me.
The advert which appears in your website/piece, is essentially identical to the Work and clearly used the Work as its basis.

You neither asked for nor received permission to use the Work as the basis for the advert, nor to make or distribute copies of it. Therefore, I believe you have willfully infringed my rights under 17 USC Section 101, et seq. and could be liable for statutory damages as high as $100,000.
Under the copyright law I can demand:
Compensation and Immediately cease the use and distribution of all infringing works derived from the Work, and all copies of it, and that you deliver to me all unused, undistributed copies of it, or destroy such copies immediately, and that you desist from this or any other infringement of my rights in the future.

However, currently I demand you to delete this image that does not belong to you, or I will demand a compensation for the use of the image.
Your company did not notify me, we did not sign any contracts, and I have not been paid for the use of my work.
If I have not received an affirmative response from you in two weeks, I shall consider taking the full legal remedies available to rectify this situation.

Sincerely,

Paula Verónica Busto Courtois

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Paula dear thank you giving so much time to my blog. but beleive me i dont understand what are you so upset about. this image is my friends poetry iin urdu and i translated into english. i didnt do any cheating nor i have any intension to do. will you please clarify it further. i dont want to offend you. Shaista Mufti the poetess is my friend. you can see the urdu poetry on that image. even then if you want me to delete it i have no issue i WILL DELETE IT. Stay blessed

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Thank you for your reply. I´m not upset at all, this is a letter about a Copyright or DMCA issue we are having here. I think it´s better to inform before taking any legal meassure. I do not have any problems with the poetry itself, but it is illegal to use my copyrighted artwork to display your friend´s work. My work is not stock to be modified… if it were, we would have to discuss the payment. You have the original link that prooves it is mine, http://darkdevil16.deviantart.com/art/Lonely-is-the-Night-263611659 maybe you will have to login into the Deviantart community to see it. And in the artist´s comment you may read that I do not allow any use of my work. I´m asking you to delete this photograph, because it is an unathorized misrepresentation of my work. Thanks again.

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If i knew it I wouldnt have done it. Iam sorry:)
i will delete it instantly. God bless you

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