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Remember, I miss you when———

Posted on: August 17, 2012


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Remember, I miss you when———

The Poplar blooms

The Pine blubbers

The Cyprus whimper

Remember, I miss you

The Moon shines

The spring trickles

The Jasmine emits fragrance

 Remember, I miss you!

The Partridge whines

 The Cherries ripened

The sparrows tweet

Remember, I miss you!

 The Ravi wobbles

The Chenab grouches

The Sutlej is jittery

Remember, I miss you!

The Shoots sprout

The Cuckoo coos

The Lightening cracks

Remember, I miss you!

 The Sun sets,

The Star dies

The Traveler is misled

Remember, I miss you!

 The Clouds holler

The Rains slobber

The Hearts clobber

Remember, I miss you!

 rains slobber

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10 Responses to "Remember, I miss you when———"

bhoot khoob.Likhti tou acha thein ab shairi bhi khoob karney lagein.

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thank you for reading Sabiha darling.

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I liked it soo much .. can’t explain in words
Keep up the good work Aunty. God Bless You🙂

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khush raho Binish beta. mera dil khush ker diya tum ne. love you

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Loved it🙂

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shukr ha tum aai tu sahi:) thank you Waqas:)

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Remember, I miss u (believe me)…… Shairi men nikhaar ata ja raha hai😉 Love u

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dil khush kittaee janab🙂 thank you

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Wow…what a brilliant thought based poem titled “Remember, I miss you when—“; truly innovative….
The Moon shines
The spring trickles
The Jasmine emits fragrance
Remember, I miss you!.
Sounds quite unique lines stating: :
The Ravi wobbles
The Chenab grouches
The Sutlej is jittery
Remember, I miss you!

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thank you Zaib ji for giving your time

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