Like a view!
Posted on: April 19, 2012
- In: Poetry
- 6 Comments
Like a view from a passing van’s pane
He met me, but like a running mass!
I’m a drifter like the wind on roadways
He waits too, but silent like a pine tree
Don’t see the buzz of the bazaar with my eyes
Township will look bleak like a house
The same sense of agony as of in prison
Come home daily as coming to office
Term returned to print grief on leaves
Sunlight is piercing eyes like a dagger;
Composed by Ahmed Shamim
Translated by Tanveer Rauf
6 Responses to "Like a view!"
April 19, 2012 at 3:17 PM
lovely expression , Ahmed Shamim has a feelings for the common man’s desires and passions , well translated by Mrs Rauf , as usual mrs rauf has penetrated in to the core of subject
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April 20, 2012 at 6:33 PM
you are right Ahmed Shamim was a poet with feelings of a common man—- very emotional realistic and pratical
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blessings for all
Just Bliss 
April 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Very beautiful and heartening. 😀
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April 19, 2012 at 11:52 AM
thank you dear 🙂
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