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On Fire

Posted on: December 23, 2011


Never imagined to be on fire in a flash,
Melting body and soul will be left behind

Misapprehending memories perhaps;
Am sauntering toward your channel

Only an unstable moment dwindled
Cautiously kept walking the entire life

Grasp image in tears thy reflection
Saw you whenever rubbing eyes —!

To save the mirror, someone
Crushed the reflection seen in it

Thou have been sidetracked too
Whilst stepping with me just afar

What have you been altered into Sahar?
Shaped in to symbol of compromises!

Composed by Sahar Ansari
Translated by Tanveer Rauf

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13 Responses to "On Fire"

Beautifully translated…… very difficult job to keep balance in translation.Allah aap ko sehat de.

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kamal ki translation he mrs rauf. keep it up! i enjoy reading your blog.

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Rabia thank you , yeh batao ho kaha tum. miss you yaar

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Wah Mrs Rauf , khali translation nahi balke intehai nafasat k sath shairi k dau pej ka bhi bharpur istamal karte huay , ashar k utar charhao ka khub khayal rakha gaya hay 😀

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Waqastum ne bohat himmat afzai ki ha. shukria beta

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Kamal ka insaaf kiya hai Ustaad Saher Ansari k saath ap ne. wahh

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wo b karam kerlein tu kiya he baat ha:)

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“To save the mirror, someone
Crushed the reflection seen in it ”

Lovely lines!

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yr comments give me energy n will to write:) thank you

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Dear Tanveer, I wish I could read/understand the original but the translation is elegant. Many thanks, Eric 🙂

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great translation mrs rauf , very close to the spirit of the original

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