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To be in love again…

Posted on: July 31, 2011


Came across Amjad Islam Amjad’s beautiful poetry and decided to translate it so, that those of you who can’t read and understand Urdu could feel this beauty too. Enjoy 🙂

Suddenly it seems good, to be drawn in,
Go on to be in love again,
but when I glance flipside, 
 a long era has gone away.
How the dust of the long journey
 has laden on our feet and heads.
You and me;
 engulfed in   our own spheres of life,
 entangled in our own eddy.
Like the two stars    that seem
Closed to each other in wilderness.
 But are millions of miles apart in 
 river of loneliness. 
How to cross this river!
 Neither you are on the brim nor I,
So, it’s better to be gripped in
Our spheres.
Gleam and shine together
Like stars.
Own up the truth of distance and bygone time.
Neither you nor I,
Can cross the river of solitude.
Though it seems charming to be
Drawn in, to be in love again!
To be in love again!

                                                             Tanveer Rauf

Original version is as below:

bahot achha bhi lagta hae
achaanak is tra dil ka dobara mubtila hona
muhabbat aashna hona

magar jab dekhta hun
waqt kitna jaa chuka hae
raaston ki dhool
qadmon aur saron par kis tra se jam chukii haen

aur hum tum
apni apni zindagi ke dayaron mei
apni apni gardishon mei
is tarha uljhe huwen haen
jis tra dasht-e-falaq mei saath chalte
do sitarey
jo bazahir saath lagte haen
magar unki rafaqat mei
karoro’n miil ki tanhai ka dariya bhi hota hae

ye dariya paar kaese ho
na tum ho us kinare par
na hum haen iss kinare par

so behtar hae
hum apne apne dariyaon ke is khala mei ghumte jaayen
sitaron ki tarha
ik saath chamke aur damke to sahi lekin
ye apne beech mei faaslon ka jo surkh dariya hae

isse tasleem hi kar len
ke is be-pul ke dariya mei
na tum hi tair sakte ho
na hum hi tair sakte hain

bahot acha toh lagta hae
achaanak is tarha dil ka muhabbat aashna hona
dobara mubtila hona!!

~Amjad Islam Amjad~

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24 Responses to "To be in love again…"

Brilliantly translated aunty, so much so that I find translation more touching than the original piece.Great work 🙂

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really excellent translation 🙂 lov u ammi

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beautifu peom and words… u are great ms tanveer:)

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thanks for showing us in both languages,

lovely work, keep it up.

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I have had this feeling lately…this yearning~

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thank you Groundedangel for kind words:)

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MASHALLAH nyc attempt………. keep it up maim… may ALLAH Bless U

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I appreciate every one who took pains to read my stuff n encourage me.

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hey ,nano this poetry really heart touching and so lovely to read it……….:)

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Poets and poetry, I appreciate their efforts but just can, get along with them.
But you had done a great job, great efforts, keep going.Very well translated.

Saba

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it is too good but i feel pain at the end, it is heart touching but it should b some pleasant feelings at the end too like ur whole blog. bcoz v all hv sorrows & happiness in their lives as u write in ur blog too but v should remember only well ended and inoocent stories of our lives like baba who sold eggs!

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I can’t find words to say “Thank you ” to you, your effort conveyed my feelings as i ever wished. Hope u understand.

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Farhana my dear its you who initiated me to translate it:) so thanks a million my dear.

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Thats really shandaar…, the poem is touching my heart…

Naveed Shah. (sillyfarmer@hotmail.com)

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thank you Naved for liking it

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[…] To be in love again… […]

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a very touchy poetry madam . . . . just love it 🙂

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love is always lovely n spreading a pleasant warm feeling for each other and for all the eyes n hearts:) love you Sara my dear:)

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Great efforts

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salam n thank you JJ. i wish you read of my blogs n comment please.

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i did post a very brief comment on 13 Nov.

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ya i hve seen that but i request you to read more of blogs and comment. there are so many. wont you help your foji sister 🙂

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